[quote=@Midori]

[@Emma]I can appreciate the master theif vibe but she's only 25 and she's stolen practically every valuable item on the face of the Earth and some other planet as well? Not to mention the crimes she may or may not have committed? She may as well have just stolen the planet instead. I'm sorry but this character is much too mary sue for my taste. You'll have to tone her down before I can accept it. 

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I think I fixed it up a bit, I can try a scale down more if you'd like. Its hard to make a character come across how you want without explaining their personality or history. She is inspired mainly by Parker from the TV show Leverage.