Soviet: You don't begin as a 'town as a whole', you'll have to fight to get that first town! Also, be more specific about that 'unknown outsider source'. I can hardly have this bite you in the back if I don't know who it is that supports you. Unless you mean even your guys don't know, in which case it could be fun. And finally, don't forget that 'old insurgents' begin with significantly less manpower than others, you'll have to recruit it first.

Caliban: If your faction is made out of soldiers you won't have international support, yet, or partisan support. Although you'd have better equipment (See Lone Wanderer's sheet)

Lone Wanderer: Some history for the leaders and the faction would be nice but otherwise good.

Augmented: Oh, union boss, I like it. But like Caliban, I'd like you to remove the foreign support bit, it'll come in time but only well implanted small groups that have been there for a while have this at the start.

Voltus_Ventus: Looks good, although despite being terrorists your group seems to have a lot of populist elements. You could upgrade your numbers a bit or maybe have international support (I could see wilhelmsland supplying you despite not wanting an independent Losnia, because they don't think you stand a chance but can still annoy and distract Gray.)