Added [i]Branded[/i] under Races, adjusted the wording of skill rank cost that [@Eklispe] pointed out was confusing.

[@Crimson Raven] Link on the Greatsword is still broken for me, just in case you made an attempt at a fix. "Terror" is a pretty powerful skill, so expect modest bonuses instead of game-changing ones. The opposite of Pi, I'm completely fine with Nosferatu as it's decently common in [i]Awakening[/i] but am totally against giving any starting character something like a Killing Edge, especially a specially crafted one. In this game we're using overall craftsmanship of a weapon to determine its value, and Killing Edges are already well-forged weapons. You can keep Folly, I'll let that go, if you agree to it being forged [i]down[/i]. As in it was broken at some point and is now weaker as a result and on par with other starting weapons. I'm also pretty okay with a Greatsword that has latent power but is essentially just a hunk of iron at the beginning, as other players will be acquiring awesome gear as they progress you'll just "unlock" your weapon's latent potential. Backstory on the Raith brothers is good, I like Marcone's personality, points are good.

[@Eklispe] I like your character, and if you wanted to have "Quality over Quantity" give another point in another skill I'd let you. This is because players can already have one flat point in a skill as their Class Feature if they choose to do so, so I wouldn't want you to get screwed over for having a neat feature.

As a general notice to all, keep in mind to have your characters' starting weapons fairly simple. You'll get the cool stuff later on as you play, and if you start with a mysterious axe forged from the souls of tigers and drinks blood to gain strength you don't really have anywhere to go but down, do you? Stats and cool features don't mean much anyway, they're just a way to gauge character ability against each other, what everyone is good at and known for and what they should probably be doing on the battlefield.

I get on my flight at 1245 tomorrow, so after I get off tonight I probably won't be on until Sunday sometime.