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Some grammatical errors, but nothing too big. I like the ‘adopted’ angle a decent amount and think it’ll contrast other Saiyan’s in the ISF greatly. Techniques are described a little odd, but they don’t seem too powerful to abuse. Should be okay.
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So can I post in the CS or fix the grammar first? Sorry about that btw, wrote the whole thing down on my phone outside my house so couldn't pay that much attention to it at the time.