I've seen definitive improvement in your writing since we began, which makes me happy. There is of course the occasional misspelling of a word, but I don't really care about that. (English probably not your main language) But yeah. I'm happy as how the RP is progressing. I have a great partner in you 
Say, would you do me a favor and take a look at this
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/85023-the-king-is-dead-long-live-the-king/ooc

I would like to know what you think of such an RP.