[@Flynn]I am really grateful to be your partner. Once I read that: "To be a good writer you need talent. To be a great writer in a foreign language, you need to copy those who have talent." And yes it is true, as I am hungarian. I have won several writing competitions, yet I here I am, not that good with English.
Also for the RP. What do you mean by: "Mostly done by PM?" that sounds really hard to trrace, even if done offically.The idea is good, I see no reson why it couldn't be amazing. But there are doubts in me, for how people influence each toher IRL instead of within context. The idea has it's flaws, and might not be so full of adrenaline. But that is of course suggested. But now the biggest flaw I think that should be removed. Magic. It has mazing potential, and mixing it with an already hard and dark theme is really,really prone to Power/Metagaming. That is my view. It is an amazing idea, that is prone to be overthrown by players.