Hey i'm the last person to complain about typos lol! I copy everything into a google-doc anyways to keep it safe anyways, so i can edit as i go as need be. 

And woooo hot damn we got ourselves a Space Chase! It will probably help Viva a lot too probably, give her something to focus on other than her brother for a while. Lucidae does not have guns, but that doesn't mean the ones chasing them dont, which is serious modivation to not get anywhere near shooting range. (And also LOL at the idea of Noah trying to draw blood while Viva's whipping the ship around and everything!)

We should hash out what exactly went down when the thing went south too shouldn't we. I'm of the mind that one of the goons they were working with was trying to pick a fight, and Val was more than happy to ablidge them- only he takes it too far, and when Valko's got his goon on the ground near humiliated, guy draws a gun and shoots him to the gut. To which Valko drew his own gun and shot him in the head, resluting in a worse fight where they kick the rest off the ship and they blast off as fast as they can.