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[i]With this in mind the ISF officers decided to offer him a spot in their Academy. It was either that or be arrested[/i]

I'd take this out and replace it with: "Given his heroic actions the ISF offered him an official pardon and offered him the opportunity to join their ranks in the ISF Academy if he wished to join them defeating other planetary and interstellar threats like the men he had defeated." Otherwise it's pretty solid and I have no issues with it!