[quote=Razil] this is cool i want in XD Name: Maira RobinAge: 18Gender: FemaleWeight: 30Height: 7 foot 2Appearance: long raven black hair with a blood read streak running all the way down the front on one side. Big black Ravens wings (Im part Raven) with red tips on the ends. Golden eyes with unusually large irises. sharp features (ie noticeable cheek bones and jaw line.) Unualy long fingers with slight claws at the end (not to big there kinda like long nails) she is able to hide her wings by folding them up under her leather Jaketill add a pic when i find one =)Personality: strong and silent. loyal to allies and friends but cold and hostile to those she doesn't trust. she is nice but can be a bit old fashioned as she was brought up in the clock tower of a church by a priest.Likes: flying to high heights. cathedrals. clocks and Birds.DIslikes: Fire, thunder and lightningStrengths: speed and swiftnessWeaknesses: she lacks in greatly in deferenceHistory: she was abandoned by her family at the gates of the great cathedral. shunned by her family that didn't what a hideous creature for a daughter. she grew up alone in the clock tower gazing over the city from behind the face of the clock. she never had friends apart from her Pet Raven Hugo who has been her best friend since she was a fledgling.Weapon: a whip with a clawed tip it curls and extends like a snake at will. it curls around her wrist when not in use like a coil or bangles, it is hidden well.Semblance: has the ability to understand all bird life. [/quote] I have a couple things about this that I am asking you to change just so that she can fit in to this. Is she a Raven Faunus? If so, I'm not really sure what I should ask since bird faunus' haven't been introduced in the series as of yet, so I don't know if they're possible or not. Do her wings give her flight? To avoid any problems with OP-ness, I'm going to have to ask you to somehow limit this, in some way, possibly take a great deal of strength away from her while she flies or something that would limit her power. for her weight, 30-what? I'm not sure if she's 30lbs, or 30kg... or what? could you also make her just a bit shorter? Maybe taller than the average human height, and not a towering and imposing faunus.