Sorry for taking a while to get Reviews done. 

[hider=The 100% Honest Truth] I actually love the story. the way you tell it makes the reader how the character you portrayed in the story felt. it felt really deep and i for one love a story in which the meaning is deep. i think it is really really well put together as a story, even if not everyone can relate to your character but then again thats only a minor thing that doesnt ruin the story telling at all 8/10 [/hider]

I guess cause ive done a Story ill do a Poem as well

[hider=Sonnet O] [@mdk] so obviously its about Obama. However i dont quite understand the first two Stanza's so if im wrong please Correct me. i have a feeling as though the middle aged man may be homeless or cant afford health care or something but its obvious that he isnt getting something, atleast to me it is and its obamas fault. i think for its good just a little hard to understand. 7/10 [/hider]

and im sorry that i couldnt review everyones but i dont have alot of time and i wanted to make sure a few of you had your reviews.