[quote=@Ariamis] [@Cassowarysaur] Currently it's a free posting period so you can post as much as you like, at least for the next post where I'll post the collab and a followup to Recon's post. After that it's most likely a time skip, but there still haven't been any opinions as to [b]whether that should be its own individual post or whether it should be accompanied by the next major event[/b]. [hr] Eh, decided to post it now. If redbaron had something for Lorenzo he stayed to talk with Krista before going to his office. [@Pox] That's an unusual number of commas, making the text look, I don't know, fractured. Other than that, the pilot section's fine. I don't mind the weapon extension, but I'll throw it in here that it can at most extend to half the weapon's length. The Armor section's wording is a bit wonky, so I'll take it as having the same armor type as Roxy. The name of the Framewerk and it's weapons irks me; specifically, "Palladin". I constantly read it as Paladin, and I think there's no reason it can't be named that. Also, add this to the sheet: Synchro Rate: 77% [/quote] I think it should be it's own individual post. LHG and I would like to have more interesting interactions.