[@Shard]Hello and welcome! First off, I'd like to say that the general coding of the sheet makes it a lot easier for us GM's to read it. Categories being in bold and separated with underline makes it feel more organized. I'll start with the moves: -The Kekkei Genkai is a form of enhanced chakra flow I assume? If so, it can affect ANY inanimate object or specific objects to your character? I didn't quite get that. -Sharpen: How sharp does it get? Flying Swallow from Asuma and Samurai Sword Technique essentially do this (and at a higher rank). -Force: Once again, a little detail on scaling would be great. Give examples if you want, but make it possible for us to imagine. -Vibration: I get the effects here but you'll have to, once again, detail how it works, how long the effects last and how much do the effects vary depending on size? -Shear: So it's like Sharpen... But sharper? This is strange, and kind of makes Sharpen useless if you can just use this. -Flash: Nothing wrong with it, I just find that one pretty good. Nice -Ethereal: We've hit Tobi zone. Okay, before I outright deny this, I want you to detail it A LOT more (as you respond to this post, put the description in) because this is easily a gamebreaking move. However we all know details can make things a lot better. Don't get your hopes up, I'm still inclined to downright ban it. There isn't much else to say, the rest is pretty solid. It'd be interesting if this small clan came from a small country due to the fact that they obviously have Chinese origin names and that's almost nonexistent in the Naruto world. But that's just an idea. Anyway that's my review.