[@yoshua171]

I do have some issues. First and foremost is that the magic has some chance of being over powered, which leaves no room for development. To me it doesn't seem like it has any weaknesses and that makes me wary. I mean yeah, sure Jarvis and Jamie could easily take him down as could time lord, but they are meant to be over powered. You can't have an over powered character right from the start. 

Secondly, guilds only started coming back 15 years ago in the time line, and all the guilds and remnants of any magic were destroyed after the EVENT a 100 years ago. The people of fiore didn't give a crap that the guilds saved them, all they cared about was the destruction it caused and the horror of magic. Where Fairy tail was, there is nothing and no one even knows where it use to be anymore. 

Also, there is no harvest festival. Again, magic has only just started to be trusted again and the commoners would not celebrate a festival put on by magicians even five years ago. 

Thirdly, dark guilds didn't really start appearing until...about seven years ago-not saying that they didn't have exist because of course they did, but know one knew of them until then. Well, Jarvis and Jamie did but that's a story for another time. 

Fourthly, and finally, magic books were considered dark arts, and as such wouldn't be easy to lay your hands on. I'm not saying impossible to but if he was even seen with the book before...oh, 12 or so years ago, chances are he would have been prosecuted and Imprisoned. The trust of magic again didn't really start until about 10 years ago, which meant about 5 years of doubts, as Phoenix Wing made the first move to become an official guild and accept jobs, and as word of mouth got around that they were exceptional at them. There's more to that story but again, that's for another time.

I think that's it. My only main issue is the magic being over powered so if you fix that up, that would be great! I'll wait to give you your needed approval for this till then