[@Blackmist16] It's fine, I'm the one starting this all so I might actually need the full 8 paragraphs. As you know I have describe the city, describe the weather (because of Jack, Zora and Belle xD), Amare's thoughts and feelings. And of course what he's doing before Brontes shows up. 

Just FYI we might need you the beginning.

You see it's starting with Amare and Brontes meeting but someone needs to interrupt this meeting and go after Brontes, only to have Brontes escape with the help of Amare. This is mainly because then that person can spread the word of Brontes return and that'll be how we introduce all the characters- Each one of them explaining their thoughts on Brontes return then going from there.