[@CrystalApple] Well the majority of the things are good it's just of course the Kagune. I'm not sure how exactly this works. if it acts like a tail then does that mean it comes from the same spot as a Rinkaku? or seeing as it's classed as Koukaku does it come from behind the shoulder blade? As it's usually these locations that define what a Kagune is. So if it came from his lower back it'd be considered purely a Rinkaku but if it comes from behind his shoulder blade then it's purely a Koukaku. Also I believe Floodtalons ghoul has a very similar ability in which the Kagune splits but becomes more brittle as it does. I also must add that it'd be best to just choose one type as it's rare for anyone to have two Kagune, probably even more rare to have those fuse xD