[quote=ActRaiserTheReturned]
What do people think of my entry?
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I'm just a player, but I'll give my impressions:

You need a Psychology section. (Your current Psych section, while a fun read, is more another History section. Or a run-on of the Followers section. Doesn't say much about his own Psychology, is my point.)

Dream went from childhood to young adulthood (where they are now). 

Maybe the start of the current world? Having his magic cloud appear at the start of the world seems to suggest he pre-dates Mysia and Aroseus.

Hope the feedback helps!