[quote=Ruby]
I'm just a player, but I'll give my impressions:You need a Psychology section. (Your current Psych section, while a fun read, is more another History section. Or a run-on of the Followers section. Doesn't say much about his own Psychology, is my point.)Dream went from childhood to young adulthood (where they are now). Maybe the start of the current world? Having his magic cloud appear at the start of the world seems to suggest he pre-dates Mysia and Aroseus.Hope the feedback helps!
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Oh no, the magic cloud is his father/mother. When Mysia and Aroesus killed it, is when he was born. So he's younger than the old gods. But I get what you're saying.