[quote=pyroman]
I have a couple things about this that I am asking you to change just so that she can fit in to this.Is she a Raven Faunus? If so, I'm not really sure what I should ask since bird faunus' haven't been introduced in the series as of yet, so I don't know if they're possible or not. Do her wings give her flight? To avoid any problems with OP-ness, I'm going to have to ask you to somehow limit this, in some way, possibly take a great deal of strength away from her while she flies or something that would limit her power.for her weight, 30-what? I'm not sure if she's 30lbs, or 30kg... or what?could you also make her just a bit shorter? Maybe taller than the average human height, and not a towering and imposing faunus.
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[quote=pyroman]
I have a couple things about this that I am asking you to change just so that she can fit in to this.Is she a Raven Faunus? If so, I'm not really sure what I should ask since bird faunus' haven't been introduced in the series as of yet, so I don't know if they're possible or not. Do her wings give her flight? To avoid any problems with OP-ness, I'm going to have to ask you to somehow limit this, in some way, possibly take a great deal of strength away from her while she flies or something that would limit her power.for her weight, 30-what? I'm not sure if she's 30lbs, or 30kg... or what?could you also make her just a bit shorter? Maybe taller than the average human height, and not a towering and imposing faunus.
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ah ok ill fix it

i edited it is that better?