2 small things. I have a small color mutation in my eyes so i may have adrressed some of the hair colors wrong and secondos I made bare assumptions on how the people would act from the first time Victorica has seen them. If it is inaccurate or troublesome please say so. This is new so Im trying to see if it is comming to a liking

Also i did not do a grammar correction in my post yet since im way to tired >.<