[quote=@Fish of Oblivion] Okay, so I'm not a GM, but- 1- S-Rank isn't a thing. If you want a Rank above A, use A+. If you really want to make this guy the luckiest fucker alive, use A++ or EX. 2- Those aren't actual Class Skills or Personal Skills. I don't make a habit of recommending the wiki, [url=http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Skill]but here's a compendium of existing skills.[/url] 3- Setting aside the issue of True Magic, EX- is not a thing. EX is for stuff that's unable to be properly quantified on the ranking scale, so applying modifiers to it is pointless. EDIT: Also, like Ashifili pointed out, the whole point of Berserker is Mad Enhancement, so it's... pretty strange that you've excluded it. [/quote] [quote=@Ashifili] No you haven't. If you have, why does your Berserker not have Mad Enhancement? Why does he have a stat that is S rank? Why does he have sword summoning magics in his Class Skills section? Why does he have no proper Personal Skills? Why does his Noble Phantasm do all that stuff, when it doesn't relate at all to the legend the Muramasa swords are associated with? More importantly, why is a SWORDSMITH good at SWORDFIGHTING? Being a blacksmith doesn't make you a skilled knight, so why do you have him as a master swordsman with godly reflexes, when he never even actually fought anyone? I mean, I'm just going off the Wikipedia article, so if you have any better sources, please link them. [/quote] Whoh, my understanding was the mad enhancement was optional. For example, Lancelot had it because his master, Kariya wasn't trained as a full fledged mage, so he needed a power boost. Heracles had it because it made him more submissive. On top of that, the idea of the multiple katanas was because he was a blacksmith that created swords. Master sword man, 'cause, why not? He could have trained with his swords. The legends of the muramasa swords are really varied, but one things stuck out to me: His swords where renowned for their quality. So I took that a step futher, and made a skill that essentially cut anything. The I honestly wasn't sure what to do with the class skills, as the ones there...eh, I just don't like them much. In summary, I did take a lot of freedom with the whole design, but it still lines with the legends. I didn't, say, make him a girl or anything. Edit: I had a few other ideas so if it is a problem I can rework it.