[@Eviledd1984]Okay, so... I wasn't gonna say anything the last time, but honestly, I think now I need to start being brutally honest here. This is [i]nowhere near[/i] the level of effort I expect from people in this RP. This is casual yes, but it's [i]high[/i]-casual, and even casual RPs demand a certain proficiency regarding spelling and grammar that you have not been demonstrating to me so far. On top of that, the character sheet is about as bare-bones as it can possibly be, and it doesn't tell me much about the character, what little of her there is. You didn't even bother to change your character's name from the first draft, which reflects a sort of hollow pick and mix of mish-mash parts that just tells me this character has no real identity of her own. She's just a template. A name and a vaguely defined set of characteristics to be tweaked and filled in with whatever contents are most appropriate, and that's not the kind of character I want in my RP. I also get the feeling I should be vaguely offended by the "high-functioning autistic" bit, but I'm just going to ignore that because I don't wanna be that PC guy no one likes.

Also, this is nitpicky and beyond petty, but imma indulge it anyway. [i]That picture is arse.[/i] Was there really no better zombie girl pics you could magic up from the ether? The picture is about as low-effort as your profile frankly, and I get the distinct impression it came from either deviantart, Gaia Online, or Adventure Quest. None of those are good things.

Basically, if you want your character to be accepted, you're going to have to do a lot better. Show me you're willing to put the time and effort into being mindful of proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation, and into making a fully-fleshed out character with a heart and soul to it that isn't just vacuous and empty like this one (ironic considering she's a zombie, but I hope you see my point).