Hi there and welcome!! First things first- I have read your blog and I think it's beautiful. Secondly, don't take the criticism of others here too seriously,  or personally.  Writing is a learning process,  we get to learn about ourselves, the world, the rules, and everything in between.  

That being said, I hope you enjoy all that the guild has to offer, because it really is a lot. And happy rp'ing :) my door is always open if you wanna chat or rp :)