It's all good. The RP does move at a reasonably stable pace. Having an RP move too quickly can often have a flare effect where it starts off bright and strong but dies off fairly soon afterwards. also looking forwards to seeing what you come up with. I've got a few ideas for myself and my character that may be able to help but the world that you've generated does have a decent amount of depth and it's interesting because it allows for these imaginative ideas to occur. I suppose thanks from my part are in order as this is probably coming up to one of the longer RPs that I've entered. Not the most amount of posts, but longest in time frame.