Alright, uh... Well, since I'll be heading off in a bit anyhow, let's get the evaluations out of the way.

[@LotusWarrior]: 
[list][*]Hrm. well, for one, I'd rather not have magitech in the RP, because then it sorta crosses the boundary as the series puts it (no pun intended) and pushes it into pseudo sci-fi territory. It's... Strange, to say the least. I mean, I know that one character in the series uses a weapon that does that sort of thing, but having multiple ones stocked...
Plus having to compete with others because, you know, only one stone drops per enemy, and coming into conflict because no speaking...
Yeah...
[*]Grammatical errors aside, 'American youmu hunting' sounds... Silly. I would like to think that there isn't one generalized fighting style, considering how every clan essentially has its own unique abilities. But I digress.
[*]Okay, that ability? Too multipurpose for my liking. 20 foot attack/defense radius on a physical and spiritual level, healing, flight, and so on and so forth... A bit too much in one pack for my liking. The limits thereof are also not defined, which... Worries me. Tuning heavily recommended, in this case.
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I have some statements about the secondary form you sent in, but those will be PMed for the sake of privacy.

As for [@VitaVitaAR]...
[list][*]Hrm... Well, while I have no issues with using images for appearance, I'd still like some more side details to supplement it. Height, hair color, eye color, notable features that aren't explicitly stated... You know, that sorta thing.
[*]Onmyodo is a fine basis for abilities, but I do have to ask if she can just pop any old ream of paper. Like... Computer/copy paper? Looseleaf? Any benefits/weaknesses of using certain materials? Things like that.
[*]So... What happened to her parents? Orphaned? Killed? What?
[*]How big is that duffel bag you speak of?
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's all for now. Sorry if I'm being a bit nitpicky, but quality control and digging up information and all that. Sometimes, just gotta hunt for information that you might be able to use/exploit in the future... And all that.