Wait, I am confused, your description of the order says the handle relations and deal with magic based crimes. Based on what you've been saying they also hunt down and kill/imprison innocent magical beings just for being a potential threat or magical. Also the character planned was a small (car sized) dragon with druidic abilities that would work in a brawler role. The rest of the race description is background fluff and can be removed. If that's still not ok I can come up with something else.