[@The Omnipotent Sphere] Love the character, Is he actually a Cleric of Orcorum or is he just a worshiper? He's fine either way this is just my own curiosity. I like the touch with the Gold Knights, I like the ship ALOT. I can't seem to spot anything particularly problematic. I think he will fit in quite nicely with the Knights of Star. 

And Gods TYPICALLY only have one Avatar and that sounds good to me

Quick Geography lesson for Galendar: Angel's Landing sits smack in the middle of the continent and the whole nation of Galendar is made up of 8 Providences and Angel's Landing is the capital of Carincal the Providence that sits at the center of the nation. Its also the largest city in Galendar, second only to one called Kevin's Watch which sits on one edge of the nation. At some point here I will get a map all put together for reference