Sorry for the double post but i cant edit at mentions in. [@The_written_john] Okay nice job on the character. Obviously the race thing has to get sorted. i dont think its a huge problem. We can talk about it. The only big problem is the magic/god relation. Its not the magic itself all that is fine. So Channeled magic needs a source. Either and item or another being. Typically a god/elemental lord/fae lord/Devil. So for her channeled magic she either needs a magic item that allows her those abilities or you need a god that grants them (Wild magic is fine no worries there) If you would like perhaps she has some relation to the Elemental Lord of Air or Elemental Lord of Storms? (I actually dont have a gender for Elemental lord of Air so it could be the Elemental Lady if you would prefer) [@vietmyke] Im reading your cs next I promise