[@Dead Cruiser]Like it! Couple of things, firstly I'd like to know why such an experienced warrior and corsair would ever agree to join a rather freshly minted Trader? Inexperienced [i]and[/i] human. Secondly, could you put it into a hider please. :) Muchos gracias.


[@agentmanatee]Right, me and Hank (my co-GM) have had a discussion on your character and, for the moment, we have decided to [b]reject[/b] the profile; more pedantic reasons for this are the formatting and a number of spelling errors, but perhaps the most important thing is that Gravius seems like a rather unfinished/rushed attempt at what should be one of the most interesting characters in the RP. 

He is a Navigator, more than human and nearly as alien as aliens are to mankind, possessing the literal third eye on their forehead and viewing many as lesser beings and with disdain. The current character sheet just does not seem to show this, to show us what exaclty a Navigator is, how interesting they truly are, and what a unique figure he would cut in the Rogue Traders retinue.

Now, you can feel free to either re-vamp/correct the sheet and apply again or, if you wish, to choose another character. The choice is up to you.