[@IcePezz] These are excellent points and I will change Ionathan to probably just a normal Guardsman and remove the bit about his father. With the whole Major kissing thing I was more talking about a random supply town rather than Waeldeshore itself but I'll just remove that from the backstory its not really important information, that being said I must say that if you don’t mind I would like to know a little about the war itself, For example, during the war was Silver Lilly Isle invaded and partically ocupied or did it beat back the attackers? Also, how effected was Silver Lilly Isle  by the war? Wsd it battered or left ruined, I know the first page does say about the war and how "It’s scar still runs deep" but if you don’t mind I would like some more information please. Anyways thank you for the feedback, I will change Ionathan post haste