Yeah FF was pretty bad because I was ten and had no concept of how to write good so last year I rewrote it and got a B I was so happy I hugged my teacher so tightly.

I have studied so many books and why people write like that and the emotion you get from it as well.  I also watch Movies and get tips from Movies as well learning how the screen writers write out the lines and how things are positioned as well. Movies are fun to look at a lot of times.

No I don't mind do not worry you where not harsh to me and o understand people get stressed and such so do not mind that stuff.