[quote=@ADParis] [@LHG100] I'm still around. :P oh and are we gonna do another cooperative post thing, or are we gonna post ourselves? cause again, it feels like my post might be lacking length-wise [s]that's what she said[/s] [/quote] I find whenever that happens I think about what it is that I want to convey and improve on some of the details. Smell, touch, emotion. Everything can be expanded on to help build the story. If you want I can give you a hand at some point so that you can get into the rhythm of things. :) At the moment I'm in the city so I'm not gonna be able to post til tonight, or afternoon at least. Was just a little stuck on what to post last night as I wasn't clued up on the direction, plus it was a bit of a meh day for me.