Scar, looking good, but I have a few things I'll need to see.

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If there is a color reference in the name, it needs to be more overt, because I, with the assistance of google, do not get it. If not, there needs to be one

I'll need a little more from family, affiliations and relationships. Surely he has met someone who impacted him in his years of life: give me something to work with

Gah, I've seen that picture so many times for PCs. It is fine, and if you're set on it, I can deal, but like I said, I would prefer a description rather than a picture.

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Rogue, once you've finished editing and adding, you're good to post. Same goes for Scar and Bugz.