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Summary of what the snip once was:
A) Words like "Unmatched" are generally considered a no-no
B) Establishing oneself to be a galactic power without even being accepted first is a bit too far.
 - I) Saying you have hands in every economic power means you have hands in every player empire, which means you're saying that, right from the start, you could send anyone into rebellion

I think you're taking your power a bit too far, because you're already establishing yourself as a galactic power without even being accepted.