[@Ghost Queen] The entire time I read the CS I didn't look at his image. I thought 'he reminds me of the guy from Dexter's Lab on the Justice Friends. Then I looked at the pic and BAM! I like the idea of a teen with a jacked up guitar of power, but not the whole actually being a God of Rock. You wanna make a teen hero with a sonic guitar, I'm all for it. [@Weird Tales] Okay, I'm pretty sure I bolded it up top. We're all rookies and a marksman and a duplicating man beat Robin to death and kept us all from interfering. I guy with a power set like this... [quote]He has the strength of 9 Olympic strong men and the speed of 9 professional athletes. His body has angel wings, which grant him the power of high-speed flight and excellent aerial agility. His senses are several times stronger than a normal human and he possesses a reaction time that allows him to knock bullets out of the air with his mace, from minor firearms such as pistols and shotguns.[/quote] ... wouldn't have much problem taking down the two villains. It's a good CS, reminds me a little of Zauriel from the Grant Morrison era JLA, but it's too much to be in a group of inexperienced heroes. Heroes with weapons are also a thing apparently, and with our resident Amazon and Met's ninja already wielding them I don't think any future accepted CS's will have characters who use weapons. [@DocTachyon] I like the WIP for the most part, but for him to get taken down by a bunch of Multiplex duplicates you'd have to limit his power thievery to literally skin to skin contact. That was he wouldn't just steal Multiplex' duplication power... [@Ultimate Spidey] This is a WIP I can't wait to see the rest of. With super speed you'd have to have Deadshot take her down in the opening of the fight before Robin died. _______________________________________ On a separate note: A lot of what I'm seeing powers wise is every other hero having heightened physical attributes plus a few additional powers. From here on out I don't wanna see anymore of that. Simplify. Less is more. Challenge yourself. I also thought I saw somebody who transformed into a Bear but it's gone or been replaced. With Met's person changing into a Chinese demon dog or whatever any werebears/wolves/etc would be too redundant. When you look at the classic Teen Titans there's: Robin, trained by Batman w/no powers; Speedy, trained by Green Arrow w/no powers; Aqualad, trained by Aquaman w/power to breath underwater; Kid Flash, trained by Flash w/speed that always got him ahead of himself and tripped him up; Wonder Girl, trained by Wonder Woman w/bullet proof bracelets only. ^^^^ That team right there would've been destroyed by Deadshot and Multiplex. We shouldn't be much more than that even with a larger group. ~KL~