So, here's a WIP: [hider=My WIP] [b]Name:[/b] Miss Cecelia Garron [b]Age:[/b] 24 [b]Gear:[/b] Twin stiletto daggers and a lockpick set [b]History w/ the Ankou:[/b] Miss Garron has frequently been contracted for the more set-up-ish jobs. With an ability and tools to pick locks, Cecelia can get in, kill, and make it look like he slipped and broke his neck on the stairs going down. She joined the Ankou because home was hell. Her mom had died birthing her and her father had been a drunk out of grief. Her older brother Andrew practically raised her. Neither had much talent that would get them jobs, but they hardly cared, since they could get by with... less legal actions. They never really thrived in life until one of them got caught and it turned into a life/death situation. The obvious response was to kill the homeowner to prevent both of their deaths, but they were creative, and made it look like an accident. Fortunately for them, an assassin had been contracted to kill the bloke, and the sent assassin was fascinated by their handy work. Andrew decided he didn't like the idea of killing when not necessary, but Cecelia was more focused on food doing more than just surviving. She always sends andrew 10% of her earnings in hopes that he doesn't have to break the law to keep living. Anything to help him. [/hider] Just a few thoughts though: - CS changes (just my opinions): an appearance section. Never bad to know what a character looks like. Maybe separate the non-Ankou history in a different section. And maybe a personality/ethics section to get a feel of how (s)he acts. - What kind of technology are we going for? Or at least how much impact does the "Sci-Fi" aspect fit in? I don't personally see much sci-fi going on in the intros. -