[@Raijinslayer]: I just realized he's also albino. Probably should change that since Shi came first and she's albino and they're both homunculi. ^^; I don't think he needs to be so old anymore, as well, since he's no longer Jack the Ripper. Also if he was built to be a physical fighter, he probably wouldn't have magic at all, or very low amounts intended to boost his combat skills, like Shi. Also I don't think he needs magic as a character since he's got that magic trait(which could have been put into him just by his creation). Also you need to list the spells he has in his knife, at least enough to know what they can do.