[quote=@LHG100] Operation: "Best Foot Forwards" Status. []Failed []Ripped from the jaws of defeat []Good run []Great run [✔]TYRANNOSAURUS #REKT Good job everyone, I hope we all had a great time! Probably a bit short and a bit easy, but I do hope everyone enjoyed it. Any critique for tweaking the future missions I have planned, anybody? [/quote] I'm liking it, and it's a well designed RP. Never really had one that focused more on collabs (just as long as they aren't relied on, but that's a minor point), and as a GM not having a set character does allow you to have more control over the game. So a lil thank you. :) Ideas, tweaks and such? Have you thought about expanding the story? Not like a massive global scale, but with an enemy character that will return in a later mission, maybe with a possible rivalvy with a particular person? Also, we could set up the missions like chapters in a novel? (Eg: Chapter 1: The Fairbanks Investigation) We can then link it in the OOC 1st post like an index or quest log. Dunno what everyone else thinks, but it seems like a logical approach. (I'm happy to be told things are terrible ideas as well, so don't ever feel like not telling me otherwise either)