[@Burthstone] so, your post is okay, but I'd [i]really[/i] appreciate it if you maybe added some internal monologue and maybe some other expressions or body language he's displaying as I like to keep my posts at around 2 paragraphs or more. If I'm asking too much or being rude TELL ME, I'd rather know than not.

Just...I feel like my response will be subpar if I try right now, which is a criticism on me, not you >.>