[quote=@yoshua171] [@Burthstone] so, your post is okay, but I'd [i]really[/i] appreciate it if you maybe added some internal monologue and maybe some other expressions or body language he's displaying as I like to keep my posts at around 2 paragraphs or more. If I'm asking too much or being rude TELL ME, I'd rather know than not. Just...I feel like my response will be subpar if I try right now, which is a criticism on me, not you >.> [/quote] I understand the two paragraphs thing, but that's honestly [i]really[/i] hard to do in conversations (One of the things I don't like about rping on forums), but besides that there's not a lot of internal monologue or body language to really do. Grant isn't at all suspicious of Dornae, so his internal monologue is basically "Oh, this is going to make my life [i]so[/i] much easier." Maybe Dornae could give him the wrong symbols?