[quote=@RokkuHoshi]
Appearance: Max is five feet, two inches tall with an [b]average weight of 143[/b], short, messy, brown hair, slightly pointed ears and a golden tint to his otherwise tan skin
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Average weight? Surely he's only got one weight? Not only that, but he weighs 143... Tonnes?

[quote=@RokkuHoshi]
shortswords strapped to the back of his pack and a [b]composite long bow[/b]
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Is this deliberate? You don't really get composite long bows, they would be almost impossible to draw for a normal person!


You have a hell of a lot of spells, are you sure you're going to use all of them? I mean it doesn't matter if you don't (might as well have them just in case), but be really careful on what spells you use on players. For example if I were DM I would ban the use of charm spells on players, and to an extent alter self and stuff unless they are alright with it (ask them in the IC)

Also you keep 2 war dogs in your Robe? And is that a canoe in your pocket, or are you just happy to see us?

Overall I'm fairly impressed with your character, maybe a little more backstory would be nice (how did he get training as a rogue, a wizard and a warrior?)