[quote=@Altered Tundra] I could be overstepping/wrong here, but isn't the bare minimum for Advanced somewhere along the lines of 2-3 paragraphs? A minimum of one seems to be a bit too casual for advanced, no? In any case, expect my sheet to be up sometime late-Saturday, early to mid-Sunday. [/quote] [i]"[b]Generally two paragraphs[/b], but usually longer."[/i] Like Daisies said, Quality over Quantity. And I'm not going to be anal over a few paragraphs, because, to me, a short post consisting of three paragraphs is preeeetty much the same as one paragraph length-wise. Dunno. And sometimes people won't really have enough material/energy to make a super long post, and I'm fine with a quick one to bridge the jap. [hr] [@Wade Wilson] I'm not sure how you addressed my claims of Shadow powers not making sense (Since, unlike other elements, it's literally nothing). Personally, I'd use Shadow powers for stealth abilities, and whatnot (Like making the area darker, and such and such). [quote=@Wade Wilson][b]Tendrils[/b] - One of his combat powers, Colton's shadow tendrils allow him to disarm his opponents, strangle them, [b]or more.[/b] [/quote] "Or more" in this situation means tentacle porn. [hr] [@DJAtomika] Now, I'm not trying to force everyone to make their sheets hyper detailed like mine (Nor am I sure that you're even [i]finished[/i]), but Marcus's sheet seems a little barebones for the advance section, don't you think? His appearance could use more about his body than his build and hair. What about his gait? Or his facial features? Other distinguishing features? He does seem to be pretty one-note in the personality area, too. He's pretty much just a nice guy troubled by his brother's death? Don't you think there could be a [i]little[/i] more to him? What about his morality? Or anything he fears? Or how he acts when alone? Or how he acts when angry? And so on... Same with the power section. You just said "Bone manipulation, enhanced cellular regeneration, dulled pain". That doesn't say a lot about what he can do, and it can go a [i]lot[/i] of different ways. Can he shape his bones, and violently make them burst out of his skin to turn them into weapons? Or does he telekinetically control his own bones? See? It can go a lot of different way. And I want to know about the regeneration. Is he like wolverine, or does he have just enough regeneration to survive, and bounce back from his wounds?