I just got on, so I haven't seen the new version. I'll see if I can narrow down some of the problems a bit. 

Mmkay. Spirits review. I’ll take it from the top again.

I have no clue how Phantom missed this before, but due to plot reasons, can you change her aura colour from black? A birthstone (also known as Brazilian Opal) opal is white with many different colours inside, whilst here in Australia, we have medium blue opals with many different colours inside. I suggest one of those. If those colours aren’t to your liking though, [url=https://1982c94537f01b662573-b9e824098780b27c3cd7d8202e38c3b6.ssl.cf1.rackcdn.com/uploads/content/content_1360367335.jpg] this picture might help.[/url]

In response to what Phantom wrote about her backstory, may I make a suggestion? Rather than having her parents be a renowned martial artist and a famous sports star, make the martial artist a teacher at, or owner of, a martials arts school. This would allow them to still be very good at martial arts, teach her to follow in their footsteps, and people who went to the school would know them, but they wouldn’t be famous.
The same could be applied to the sports star. There are plenty of smaller league sports that, though the players may be known in their community, as a whole they aren’t famous at all. Vale is a large city, (I have seen calculations that, assuming Remnant has the same mass as Earth, put Vale as a megalopolis the size of the entire country Egypt. I personally am of the belief that it’s about the size of Sydney, which is still very large, but the math is there)  so I’m sure there are going to be civilian sport centres strung all across it that never make it to national television, but the teams still get known around the areas they are in.
Her parents could just be the type to put high expectations on the child - perhaps they wanted her to go worldwide instead, and follow their footsteps but be better.
For her personality, it is a bit odd to have a submissive person who is extremely driven. But, if you believe you can play her well, then there is no problem.

Mmkay, the weapon, which Phantom has serious issues with. I have spoken to him, and pointed out the merit of changing the rule from ‘every student must make their own weapon from scratch at combat school’ to ‘students are allowed to upgrade a pre existing weapon, but it yields lower marks than students who make a weapon from scratch’. He has agreed to this, which means you can keep Blitzkrieg! As...long as you do some upgrades.
Here’s the downlow. As it is now, it is probably a good weapon for a student who has just entered combat school. We however would like for you to make some upgrades that make it a little more efficient for a Hunter, and these are the suggestions we have come up with.

- Instead of a gravity fed box clip, computerise it slightly to make it autoload the next bolt as soon as the previous bolt leaves the weapon. This would reduce loading time, and allow her to use to crossbow as a semi-automatic simply by holding down the trigger.
- Make the box clip either more compact, or holding six-eight bolts in each, which would increase her effective firing rate.
- Can you clarify if the arms of the crossbow fold away for storage? Phantom seems to think it doesn’t, but I’m sure the model clearly shows that they do.
- Make the bayonet collapsible or retractable, possibly even a variant length bayonet, that when the crossbow handle is folded away can be used as a sword/cleaver, which would give her more options for close combat.
- New question: Is the crossbow a string-based firing function, or launcher-based? If string based, she’ll have to do regular maintenance checks to make sure the locking mechanism for the forward position of the arms don’t fail at an inopportune moment. If launcher based, the arms aren’t necessary at all and can be removed if you wanted, streamlining the weapon and allowing her to use the bayonet in melee combat easier. Up to you, was just wondering.

Semblance is much better in fitting with the character this time.

Random question time: Is there a particular reason for her to be a ninja-styled character, in what she wears and her symbol? Or was that just the aesthetics you chose? It has no bearing on the character, I was just curious.