[quote=@The Fated Fallen] Average weight? Surely he's only got one weight? Not only that, but he weighs 143... Tonnes? Is this deliberate? You don't really get composite long bows, they would be almost impossible to draw for a normal person! You have a hell of a lot of spells, are you sure you're going to use all of them? I mean it doesn't matter if you don't (might as well have them just in case), but be really careful on what spells you use on players. For example if I were DM I would ban the use of charm spells on players, and to an extent alter self and stuff unless they are alright with it (ask them in the IC) Also you keep 2 war dogs in your Robe? And is that a canoe in your pocket, or are you just happy to see us? Overall I'm fairly impressed with your character, maybe a little more backstory would be nice (how did he get training as a rogue, a wizard and a warrior?) [/quote] [quote=@IcePezz] Sorry for my absence. I do like your character[@RokkuHoshi], however, there are a few things - Firstly, if he was built for speed and not for strength, he wouldn't have an arsenal to supply the whole team. Especially not one that would include a long sword. He is way way too powerful. So you're going to have to pick, which do you want more. As for the spells, there are quite a few I could do without, see [@The Fated Fallen]'s comments. 5'2" and 143 lbs? Wow, he is me irl lol well, I may weigh a little more but, for a guy - that's TINY I don't like the charm spell. And change self explains that he can change the little things, making yourself a while foot taller or shorter is not little. I'm 5'2", if I were to make myself a foot taller, I'd be an extremely tall woman. If I were to make myself shorter, I'd be a certifiable dwarf. In short, I think he is way way way too powerful, especially for someone of his stature. I can't allow him as is, to join us. [/quote] Changed a few things. Any other spells need to be removed? Them, I'm not as worried about. As for the rest of it, he has a build that suggests speed more than strength but the D&D character I am basing this guy off of is a fighter/mage/thief. He has been trained with all the weapons he has but is not a master with any. He is still young and still learning. Not to mention, some of those weapons he doesn't use often. Plus, Regina has more. As for the Robe of Useful Items, I don't know how the items are turned into patches and put on the robe but once the patches are pulled off, they become the item pictured on them and are unable to go back on the robe. It states there are some places on huge robe where some patches have already been torn off, meaning those items have already been used. I also forgot about the tapestry's magic. It works the same as a bag of holding with a twist. Firstly, it has to be hanging on a flat surface, such as a wall, then can only be used by the one who says the pass code.