[@Letter Bee] I would agree with [@The Fated Fallen] on all points.  What you've written of fine.  What matters most is how you plan on integrating it into the story.  

The only thing I'm super strick on is character creation.  This is a fantasy world, but I like to take everything with a dense of realism. I've drawn many parts of the story/setting from d&d, but this is not a d&d game. We have some players here who are more comfortable with a d&d character,  while others enjoy the flexibility and freedom outside of that structure.  As long as it makes sense and is not all mighty powerful (I hate powerbuilds- it ruins immersion), then your character should be good to go. 

Our story settles in Silver Lily Island, which is I suppose,  in the middle of everywhere and no where.  The island itself has been plagued by wars, the mages wanted to rule supreme.  We're currently 5 years after the first war,  and the predecessor of the original antagonist (Jeltheor) is attempting to force rule a second time. This time,  he's created rifts in the fabrics of the realm, allowing demons through to do his bidding.  Or so he thinks. 

Waeldeshore is the main town on the island,  about the only thriving/surviving place currently.  It's townspeople, for the most part, are extremely weary of magic. 

We've successfully gotten through our first chapter,  where our unlikely group of heroes were victorious against a demon attack. We're now moving into our second chapter,  where the group will be traveling up into the mountains to retrieve an artifact that is rumored to destroy the demons. 

I work a 9-6, mon-Friday and often am in bed quite early (I've turned into an old lady, I know <.<) but I try to be around as often as I can to mediate, navagate and contribute with my own character.  There are many here who can also help if you have any questions,  or if you need help with something.