[quote=@Lauder] [center][h1]Arûkî of the Black Lands[/h1] [img]http://www.crwflags.com/fotw/images/f/fic0orc.gif[/img][/center] [hider=my hider] [b][u]Stronghold:[/u][/b] The Black Gate, it has not been heavily modified as it has enough protection as it is but the orcs have blocked any other, except one, access points with boulders that can be moved out of the way if needed. [b][u]Commander:[/u][/b] Ûrul the Blood Fang is a regular Orc who is just abnormally large, his skin is blackened and his eyes are blood shot. He is stronger than most average orcs but by a small margin, he is clad in full metal armor and he wields a War Hammer which he uses bash skulls in. [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] The Warband came into power after Ûrul had slain another Warband's leader and taking everyone as his own whether they liked it or not. They made a treacherous pass to the Black Gate and took as their own, living there ever since. They had tried to set up a farm there but the lava flows made it too hot for plants to properly grow this leaving them with little food. They plan to make a move for the more fertile lands and get crops going for themselves. Now, the hierarchy goes as such from top(highest) to bottom(lowest) -Ûrul the Blood Fang -Ûruk Warriors act as lieutenants -Regualr Warriors -Warg care takers -Farmers [b][u]Resources:[/u][/b] WIP [b][u]Agendas and Concerns:[/u][/b] The biggest concern is a safe passage to the rest of Mordor as the group does not wish to make this it's only way in, in fact they wish to block they way down until they get a safer route. Another concern is food, they wish to raid other places to get food or establish a front in some fertile lands close to the Black Gate. Afterwards they plan to take over the rest of Mordor in order to reunite all the Warband's under one banner [b][u]Resource allocation:[/u][/b] Wargs: 100 (5) Lesser Drakes: 2 (3) Ûruks: 100 (1) Orcish Chirurgeons: 5 (1) [/hider] [/quote] Accepted. [quote=@Mardox] [center][b]The Ragers[/b][/center] Stronghold: Minas Morgul- The Ragers live in the mighty citadel of Minas Morgul. Recently, they have discovered that the city has a vast underground labyrinth that has been filled with toxic gases. The Ragers have yet to explore these depths and are aware that anything could lurk below. Furthermore, they have built a small wooden fence around their territory with the heads of defeated foes on spikes. The fence is more of a warning than a defensive barrier and patrols of elite orcs carrying horns search for trespassers. Woe to any found by the patrols who are not entering the main gate to conduct peaceful business. Commander: Dras'rius Arakbaal- An Uruk captain before Sauron's fall, he relies equally on cunning and brute force both to remain in power and acquire more. Ever since the fall of Sauron, Dras'rius has been bitter to the men of the West as he saw Isengard as his home and hopes to one day take it back and create more Uruk-Hai. He was given an impressive suit of spiky black plate armor for faithful service. Warband: Dras'rius and his men were stationed to help guard the home of the Naz'gul from any attackers or intruders. However, they were bypassed as the fighting took place elsewhere and the beginnings of the warband were left untouched. With Sauron's fall, Dras'rius and the first Ragers were left in Minas Morgul where they acted as a beacon to some of the orcs who survived and were nearby. While there were some potential challengers to Dras'rius's leadership, he was swift to dispatch the upstart by using him or her as cannon fodder for a skirmish with one of the many dangers lurking in Mordor. Hierarchy: Their hierarchy is by intelligence and strategic talent as this is a time of war where only the most capable can sit in a position of power. Structure: The warband is divided into smaller and smaller units with the smallest squads being trained for loyalty not only to the warband but also to each other. Each unit has it's own duties and orcs are assigned based on their skills. Agenda: Their first priority is to secure more permanent food supplies as the resources in the stronghold will only last so long and feeding off fallen foes is not a very reliable food source. Second, they intend to search the ruins of Bharadur and the depths of Minas Morgul for magical artifacts or knowledge to grant them an edge over their foes. Third, they either hope to find allies or convince orcs of other warband to switch their allegiance to the Ragers. Fourth, if Mordor is secured they will investigate the outside world and try to recapture Isengard and begin the creation of new Uruks. Resources: Lesser Drakes: 2 (3 points)- The drakes were native to the city and two of the first Ragers. Demi-Trolls:0 (0 points) Wargs: 40 (2 points)- The wargs were brought by stragglers of cavalry units that were decimated at the fall of the Black Gate. Uruks:200 (2 points)-The Uruks were Dras'rius's personal guard and the core of the defense force before the fall of Sauron. Chirurgeon Teams:10 (2 points)- Posted in the city. Goblin Slaves:125 (1 points)- The goblins aren't all slaves as some have proven themselves clever enough to merit officer positions. Before the fall, they were workers or stragglers. Human Slaves:0 (0 points) [/quote] It looks good, but there are a few minor aesthetic changes I would recommend, if you can amend them - such as the banner, titles and some spacing issues.