[@boomlover] Ehhhh dunno.
But man. First! You need to seriously consider practicing writing. Especially the longer sentences, where you seem to miss all markings. On the other sentences it was good, but I want you not to simply add bounty hunters without any disclaimer. And don't scre them away with a boo. Seriously. Also the sun is so scorching hot that a man dies after 20 minutes in the dunes without protection. Just to make you consider.