[h1]IC will start tomorrow with our characters in the temple before Operation Knightfall to allow anyone still working on their sheet to finish.[/h1]

[@ChaoticLaw] (Think you're the only one who hasn't submitted anything yet)

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[@Cyrania] I like it so far, but we'll just wait till you and [@JBCool] get your co-op bit up.

[@Kal-El]

-Image needs changed to something more SW based.

-Force Barrier on the condition that you can only protect a small area such as on front of your hand.

[quote=Kal]
Form VIII: Jun-Sai[/quote]

Error, does not compute.

I would like to point out [quote=Kal]Yoda felt something special in him [/quote] Yoda feels something special in everyone.

[quote=Kal]
recite the Jedi Code like he was just taking a breath. Construction of the lightsaber came to him after he was gifted an orange crystal. Images flooded his mind while he crafted the lightsaber that would guide his hand for many years. [/quote]

Initiate Trials are more than just reciting the code and lightsaber construction.

[quote=Kal]
 He could feel the dark side within Gau-Rin's aggression[/quote]

Que?


[quote=Kal]
 for the trials they took together left Gau-Rin broken and held back.[/quote]

How?

[quote=Kal]
Crim and Gau-Rin battled endlessly for several minutes before the Nikto was brought to his knees.[/quote]

Took out two Knights, more experienced than him by years. though he survived against a Padawan?


[quote=Kal]
 At one point his master reappeared to him as a Force Ghost helping to instruct him mentally. [/quote]

No.

[quote=Kal]
A determined young man that achieved the rank of Knighthood through his knowledge of the Force and great heroism during the Clone Wars, Crim's future was looking brighter then ever. His only wish was to one day bring the Gray Jedi teachings to a higher place and maybe even meet his parents.
[/quote]

Well this is vague.