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[I]Dominic Graves[/I]
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Accepted! Sweet choice of bike. The only tiny little thing I can nag about is that he says he graduated from school at 17; he would have graduated from high school at 16 (unless he was held back) or from college at 18 or later (unless he was very talented). If you just meant he graduated and then went off when he was 17 that's fine, but you might want to reorder the sentance to make it clearer. 

That really is a tiny insignificant point though, and I don't even really care too much if you get round to changing or not xP Feel free to post your cs in the bin