[quote=@Kal-El] 1. Sure on the Barrier. 2. I created the style and it is stated he did it with his master. I would go more into detail that she was already working on her own style and they just finished it together. Really don't think I need to change that. It's a unique style. 3. Yes Yoda does. I know this. I made sure to state how he is one in many of his race so it's not being special above others since Miraluka are just naturally sensitive. 4. Did you read the whole paragraph? His last part of the trials was the sensing dark side stuff which might I add I took from the wiki on being something that can be part of the trials. 5. Gau-Rin is an aggressive being and I was just stating he could feel the dark side as his aggression was a semi-give away. 6. Because it could be felt, despite how small, other Jedi were worried about him and more cautious. He wasn't literally held back from being a Padawan or such. 7. The knight that was his master was struck down by complete surprise and an unassuming loyalty toward his padawan, thinking the Nikto would never harm him. Seera, Crim's master, was only struck because of Crim's foolish naivety in thinking Gau-Rin could change which left him open and Seera took the blow for him. Also Crim had been training for over ten years. He was closer to a Knight then a Padawan by that point. 8. You no. I think I handled that well. 9. It is meant to be vague. It gives enough to know why he was Knighted but not what he did. It's a war raging on many fronts. [/quote] 2. I didn't let other people design their own style, so still no. The reason I'm not letting people design styles? As I don't understand them to the level of the others. Besides, most moves are encompassed into the different forms. They have existed for thousands of years, with thousands of variations. Why do you need a new form? 4. [quote]During the glory days of the Republic, Initiates were asked to prove that their connection to the Force was strong and that they were capable of meeting the standards of being a Jedi[/quote] Nothing about Dark-Side sensy sensy. The whole point was that Initiates who had the Dark Side within them more often than not didn't end up becoming Padawans. Dark Side was a major part of the Trials of Knighthood. The Initiate trials are standardised, everyone does the same thing. They meditate, recite the code, construct a lightsaber, get tested in the Force and take part in the Apprentice Tournament. I don't mind this darkside thing being a major part of your story, but the way it's put in right now isn't going to work. 6. Okay... 7. If they were concerned with him how long was it till he struck down his master? If he surprised him and trusted him, despite the reservations. How long was it until they go to that point? 8. Yoda was the one to first discover how to interact with a Force Ghost, now I don't doubt it never happened at all other than the times we read about it or see it on screen (Even then it's very rare) though I see it as more the way it happened with Luke, with an occasional voice of guidance. In times of extreme stress Luke then subconciously learned how to see him in the Force, to later be trained on how to see Obi-Wan. You don't go through any of those stages, besides. Why did your master become a Force Ghost when all the other Jedi weren't turning into Ghosts? 9. In the end, Exile is in advanced now. I said that I wanted force powers to be outlined in the history, yet I see no mention off Barrier, or these dark side powers he was supposed to have acquired. Which I did not comment on before as I was waiting to see what your history mentioned about them. [hr] No idea why I am replying I was going to back to sleep, going to wake up for a bit then start working on my post.