[quote=@Sep] 2. I didn't let other people design their own style, so still no. The reason I'm not letting people design styles? As I don't understand them to the level of the others. Besides, most moves are encompassed into the different forms. They have existed for thousands of years, with thousands of variations. Why do you need a new form? 4. Nothing about Dark-Side sensy sensy. The whole point was that Initiates who had the Dark Side within them more often than not didn't end up becoming Padawans. Dark Side was a major part of the Trials of Knighthood. The Initiate trials are standardised, everyone does the same thing. They meditate, recite the code, construct a lightsaber, get tested in the Force and take part in the Apprentice Tournament. I don't mind this darkside thing being a major part of your story, but the way it's put in right now isn't going to work. 6. Okay... 7. If they were concerned with him how long was it till he struck down his master? If he surprised him and trusted him, despite the reservations. How long was it until they go to that point? 8. Yoda was the one to first discover how to interact with a Force Ghost, now I don't doubt it never happened at all other than the times we read about it or see it on screen (Even then it's very rare) though I see it as more the way it happened with Luke, with an occasional voice of guidance. In times of extreme stress Luke then subconciously learned how to see him in the Force, to later be trained on how to see Obi-Wan. You don't go through any of those stages, besides. Why did your master become a Force Ghost when all the other Jedi weren't turning into Ghosts? 9. In the end, Exile is in advanced now. I said that I wanted force powers to be outlined in the history, yet I see no mention off Barrier, or these dark side powers he was supposed to have acquired. Which I did not comment on before as I was waiting to see what your history mentioned about them. [hr] No idea why I am replying I was going to back to sleep, going to wake up for a bit then start working on my post. [/quote] 2. Sure I'm going to save myself the words and just do it over.